Pretty much perfect. The changed music from the TIE arrival scene stood out to me but I think that’s only because I’m too familiar with the original score in this scene. Where did you get that music from btw?
And Finn’s line also stood out a little but again, I’m not sure if I would have noticed if I hadn’t known it is a redub.
The music is an unused cue that was posted on Reddit, there was a link to it on page 25. I’ll keep tweaking it a bit, I’m glad everyone seems mostly happy with it (but I’m thankful for any criticism of course)! 😃