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Post #1050574

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Sir Ridley
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
26-Feb-2017, 7:17 AM

Other possibilities that might (or might not) be worth considering to keep the “fast cut”:

• BB8 reacting first (without TIE sounds), making Rey look up. However I’m not sure it makes sense with the direction Rey is looking in. I think Finn and Rey are on opposite sides of the castle so they wouldn’t be looking at the same thing anyway.

• Keep Rey reacting to TIE sounds and then cut to Finn reacting to crowd noise. But I guess this might feel a bit off since that would give the feeling that TIEs have been passing over Rey for the duration of the cutaway to Finn yet she just stands there. This problem is technically in the fast cut as it is, and I feel like it works there but might not work without Finn seeing TIEs.