Welcome, and thank you for lending your voice.
If I follow you, this is the mockup video in question: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AWP1FJQyF6A&feature=youtu.be
I can’t say I disagree. All things considered, this might be the best template to adopt for this scene going forward. Might need some slight tweaking since we aren’t going with TIE fighters in the establishing shot with the Destroyer. If we go this route, which seems like a good idea, I will see about using the TIE sunset shot elsewhere in the edit.