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Post #1043513

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Kexikus
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
4-Feb-2017, 5:30 AM

NeverarGreat said:

Considering this reordering, there is a potential place for the deleted scene directly after Kylo’s tantrum. Here is the work in progress placed at this point in the reordered scenes:
https://vimeo.com/202498216
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JEDIT: Including Snap in the scene creates a continuity problem, so the first part may have to go.

How does the Snap part introduce a continuity problem? This is before they leave for their attack so why shouldn’t he be there?

I really do like this placement though. It flows very well and naturally.