Typo in the last paragraph, “discovered” is spelled incorrectly. Overall coloring looks really orange too, in a Phantom Menacey sort of way. Otherwise it looks good!
Post #1038485
- Author
- Octorox
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1038485/action/topic#1038485
- Date created
- 23-Jan-2017, 11:25 PM