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Post #1033669

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Kexikus
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TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
14-Jan-2017, 8:22 AM

NeverarGreat said:

Awesome! So glad to finally find some sort of solution. šŸ˜ƒ

JEDIT: Hereā€™s close-to-final sequence, from the launch of the shuttle to landing:
https://vimeo.com/199415784
Password: kylo
And hereā€™s the uncompressed avi of the final sequence with a few more tweaks to the movement of the shuttle:
https://mega.nz/#!nM9ACJ7L!FREhN8pIrmzOy6y9u6Hr1PzpzIRi0J4dJjzRmk6mIqo

I just used the original movie edits, so obviously it will need dubbing at the very least. Beyond that though, cuts are really subjective. I suppose the Apocalypse Now TIEs can go, but ā€˜Those beasts!ā€™ sounds about right considering the surprise attack.

What do you think? Should Kylo have a TIE escort, or is he more brazen than that?

The ship movements looks unconvincing to me. An actual 3d model with animation would definetly look better here. Also I think the shuttle should be farther away and moving slower since it would arrive way earlier than the TIEs in this version. And Iā€™d add the TIE escort simply because the Empire and the First Order like to show their military power by giving escorts to everything^^

Ultimately Iā€™m not sold on the idea though. It does fix several issues for sure but it also lets us know very early that Kylo arrives which we donā€™t know in the original cut at that point. And I also find it a little unbelievable that the First Order would launch a surprise attack and at the same time have a Stardestroyer clearly visible in orbit and a shuttle coming right at their target. I personally have more problems believing that than seeing the bar patrons not running away immediately when they see the TIEs. But I guess that comes down to personal preferences and if necessary I can always edit the TIEs back in for myself^^