Kexikus said:
I’d say it’s really good already. Maybe you can play around with the pitch or tempo to make it flow more naturally. Although I have no knowledge when it comes to audio editing so maybe what I just wrote makes no sense^^For the score: I posted my idea some days ago but here it is again: I used “Kylo Ren Arrives at the Battle” from the awards consideration score for the music. First the part from approximately 0:15 to 0:27 for Finns solo scene and then 0:45 to 0:55 for the rest of the scene. Keep in mind that the album version of this track is different!
Thank you! I did play around with it a lot already, but I’ll see if I can improve it more. And I’ll try your score idea too, thanks!
Edit:
I made another FX shot. I expanded NeverarGreat’s smokeless Starkiller matte and removed the scorched planet surface around the opening.