darthrush said:
Very good crawl but the third paragraph is far too long.
STAR WARS
ROGUE ONE
The Jedi are all but extinct, the Senate is crumbling and in their wake, the Galactic Empire has engulfed the far reaches of the galaxy in fear by command of the EMPEROR.
A sinister Imperial plot to fracture the Republic has weakened any democratic solution in search of peace. Only members of the secret REBEL ALLIANCE dare make a stand against the ruthless Imperial regime.
As the shadow of the Empire looms ever larger across the galaxy, so do deeply troubling rumors. It is said a machine of unimaginable destructive power is nearing completion. A weapon too terrifying to contemplate and a threat that may be too great to overcome…
Shortened and edited version.