It was a pretty solid film overall and had a lot of good ideas but the pacing was so slow at the beginning. If I did an edit, I’d just make it fast paced and more intense
Also, I’d add an opening crawl after the opening scene and remove the title card
How would you decide to transition between the flashback and the present with the title card gone.
I’d have the movie open with the flashback and then have the title scroll. It’d then pan down to a shot of the imperial planet, and then transition to Jyn’s first scene
I’d also add more John Williams music throughout the film