Version 1.2 is uploading as I type.

Hopefully addresses most of the points people have brought up (even some of those mentioned that were actually just present in the actual film I’ve attempted to correct here).

In reference to what has changed from 1.1 to this;

Crawl redone to be more accurate
Recoloured the odd twilight shot of BB-8
Unkar re-RE-recorded and dubbed
Audio fixes
Rathtar sequence re-jigged
Maz castle music reinstated
Extra shot of castle monsters cleaned up (included by request of one of the actors in that scene)
Some scenes moved around for narrative sense
More mirrored scenes corrected
Load of other tweaks I didn’t bother to document - there’s a new Star Wars movie out!

Regarding some of DigMod’s questions above;
Snoke I think actually appears earlier in my cut than original(?) - not certain when Maz discusses him??
The only change to the ‘Force Vision’ bit is the removal of the repeated little Rey’s scream.
The first explicit reveal is the melted Vader + Grandfather moment.
And yes Poe doesn’t learn Finn’s name until they meet again at the base. There’s no ‘naming’. Finn tells Poe his name through replaced audio in the “that’s my jacket” scene.

PM me anyone interested in this new, improved cut.