Cheers for the feedback! Very easy to overlook things after a while. I’ll take a good look at these in due course - some already addressed in the next version but some great pointers nonetheless.
On first glance the below grading is untouched - it’s present in the actual film!
0:09:03 - The regrading feels really off here. I’m assuming you were going for twilight here. This is difficult as the previous frames were extremely dark and during night.
Great first draft. Looking forward to continuing efforts 😃