Woah that's awesome none. Much appreciated.

none said:

Poking through my copy the first significant contribution I find is the Luke/3po bit:

LUKE
Well, not unless you can alter
time, speed up the harvest, or
teleport me off this rock!

THREEPIO
I don’t think so, sir. I’m only
a droid and not very knowledgeable
about such things. Not on this
planet, anyways. As a matter of
fact, I’m not even sure which
planet I’m on.

LUKE
Well, if there’s a bright center
to the universe, you’re on the
planet that it’s farthest from.

THREEPIO
I see, sir.

LUKE
Uh, you can call me Luke.

THREEPIO
I see, sir Luke.

LUKE
(laughing)
Just Luke.

THREEPIO
And I am See-Threepio, human-cyborg
relations, and this is my counterpart,
Artoo-Detoo.

All that is accredited to Katz/Huyck.

Without a doubt, one of my absolute favorite passages from the film.  It really grabbed me when I was a kid, really reinforced that I was on the adventure of a lifetime.  It felt a million miles from home, yet strangely comfortable at the same time.  A  fantastic part of the film for me.

I always wondered if they were the ones behind Han's ribbing of Luke about Leia. Thinking about it, I also wouldn't be surprised if they were behind, "Let the Wookiee win!"

Here's my recreation of my copy of the book.  Remember the asterisk indicates work by Huyck and Katz:

Luke sits in the co-pilot's seat.  He and Han stare out at the vast blackness of space.

*LUKE:  So...What do you think of her, Han?

*HAN:  I'm trying not to, kid.

*LUKE:  (Under his breath)  Good ...

HAN:  Still, she's got a lot of spirit.  I don't know, do you think it's possible for a princess and a guy like me ...

LUKE:  No.

Luke says it with finality and looks away.  Han smiles at young Luke's jealousy.  They both stare at the stars and think about it.

 

...Threepio intercedes on behalf of his small companion and begins to argue with the huge wookiee.

THREEPIO:  (To Chewie)  He made a fair move.  Screaming about it can't help you.

HAN:  (To Threepio)  Let him have it.  It's not wise to upset a wookiee.

THREEPIO:  But, sir, no one worries about upsetting a droid.

*HAN:  That's because a droid doesn't rip peoples arms out of their sockets when they lose ... wookiees have been known to do that.

*THREEPIO:  I see your point.  (To Artoo)  I suggest a new strategy, Artoo.  Let ...the wookiee ... win.

Tobar, I think you are cheating!

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Yes I think Tobar is cheating also ;)

see you auntie said:

Yes I think Tobar is cheating also ;)

Maybe you ought to take Han's advice... ;)

The annotated scripts tells us which lines they wrote i think.

30% of the final script and dialog.  The snappy lines and such.

Funny that they wrote great scripts in star wars and graffiti, but Temple of Doom and Radioland Murders were Turkey's.

Didn't they also write Howard the Duck, talk about ouch in terms of your career.

In what parallel universe is TOD a turkey? ;)

I have to wonder what Lucas' relationship with Katz, Hyuck, and Kasdan is like these days. You'd think somebody who had admitted how much he hates writing in the past would have had all three of them helping out on the prequels. The lines Kasdan wrote for Crystal Skull are easy to spot.

TOD isn't a turkey but it a very ugly and flawed film in places (much like ROTJ).

The effects are sometimes below what would be expected in the films it's paying homage to, deleted sequences are edited out with very little care and the whole idea of the British being the good guys and the Indians being either childlike and helpless without a pale face or evil heart ripping monkey brain eating savages is rather racy.

It's certainly no Raiders but TLC isn't much of an improvement.

The only entirely successful Indiana Jones film is Raiders Of The Lost Ark.

Silly people talking about Indiana Jones movies that don't exist ...

Indiana Jones is called a "trilogy" but there are only two movies in it: Raiders of the Lost Ark. and The Last Crusade. There are no other movies. Period. I won't listen to any nonsense about it being otherwise ...

The Last Crusade is just a watered down remake.

With Sallah the comedy Arab, Brody the comedy English buffoon and Jones Snr the comedy....it's Sean Connery, it's always Sean Connery.

The well rounded, developed characters of the first films are gone, the awe is awful, the Nazis are full on comedy Nazis (Toht might have been played for laughs at times but you know he would really use that poker if he got the chance and the rest of them were appropriately evil little schitz).

At least TOD was exciting.