yeah sounds good... I have finished developing ideas now, I have it all completley roughly done with what I would like to do with an option to take it or leave it if it just will not work... So here are my Inputs
Bobba Fetts Demise
http://www.mediafire.com/?04r9tiqg35p6c6q
1. Moved Bobba's gun being chopped off to the end.
2. Moved the rope to the first attack Bobba makes
3. Fixed Lukes stupid Kick and removed Bobba flying in the air behind him
4. Moved Shot of the Barge geing hit again but removed Bobba
5. Removed Backgrounds when lukes hand gets hit so it appears that he is still on the nose of the skiff... Bobba shoots his Hand
6. New Shot for Bobba Taking to the sky for the second time
7. Removed Han hitting Bobbas Jet Pack
8. Bobba's head comes clean off and rests in the sand
9. Removed Bobbas head as he falls from the skiff into the sarlac pit
Final Act Incorporating Darth Enders Battle of Endor Suuestions - Basically plot suggestins and structural rough cut + Flash backs - Vader on Endor
http://www.mediafire.com/?286b58g9cda2gvb
Lukes Transition to Tattooine - Beggars Canyon
http://www.mediafire.com/?aqavinvcvq6fttv
Please try to remember that it is incomplete and the x-wing on tattooine is missing FX shots and audio samples too... aswell as Yoda needs Dubbing but it is for the purpose of structure I am doing this and trying to convey my ideas is the only way to mock it up... I hope you enjoy this storyboard video
The Exchange - Delivering the plans to the rebels
http://www.mediafire.com/?yh38u0d8a5dx831
The first shot is intended to be immediatley after the opening crawl
Basically Bobba Fett sends a transmission of the plans to home one after they pay him which would be displayed on the screen inside slave 1 after this all hell breaks loose
Audio lines are:
Rebels on radio bobas cockpit"Do you have it?"
Boba "After I get Paid"
after star destroyers jump in madine looks about " Star destroyers have enetered our sector!"
could use some pilots!!!
Madinde "prepare to make the jump to hyperspace on my mark" after he lost lots of souls bless him
Vaders lines from Interactive Boardgame undecided
To join the dots the audio in the briefing from mon mothma is changed to "The infomation brought to us(cut by the Bothan spies) pinpoints(add sss) the exact location of the deathstar" and "Many (cut Bothan spies) died bringing us this infomation"
Re-Cut Lapti-Nek
Link below... Hope you like it, I tried to get rid of the close up dodgy puppet singer and make it work including some SE footage also. Short and sweet and I think it works ok.
http://www.mediafire.com/?ndfubkhrsa1m6ix
Ideas not Yet Visualised
The Parting of Ways on Tattooine
The Lars Homestead Ruin and the Sandstorm
http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Collaborative-Fanediting-An-ROTJ-Proposition-Second-round-of-voting-has-ended-Tally-completed-Link-in-first-post/post/559150/#TopicPost559150