I just finished watching the deleted/alternate scenes, and I can't wait to see this edit put together. I have two pie-in-the-sky sort of requests, which I entirely expect you to ignore, because this is your edit and you're taking the time to make it, it's just a couple things that I would do if I had the time/energy/skill to do the same:

1) Include some of the second alternate ending dialogue, particularly the line "You and I were made for each other." I could accept the "happy" ending as a real ending if that were the final line of the film.

2) Maybe try doing just an alternate sound mix for the edit without the narration? A lot of the stuff (I think taken from the first voiceover sessions?) is downright insulting to the viewer in how much it explains.