It would be cool if you included the shots that UA mentioned (Roy putting the live end in his mouth), and that shot of the woman in the bath would be really neat too.
The other thing I have to say is that I really don't think you should use the Goldsmith temp track for the end fight. I know its really different, but it takes me out of the movie, it just doesn't work as well as the Vangelis score. Just my opinion though.