Adywan's ESB edit: Suggestion Terminal

I'm posting this here for Adywan's benefit so its easy to find.

If you have suggestions, check to see if its on the list. If not? Post in the other thread and it'll be added to this list.

Thanks

-B

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General:

1. Color Correction #
2. black R2D2 panels
3. Saber colors
4. Image Jittering
5. Obi Wan's Ghost to always appear Transparent
6. Remove black dot markers on wall where stormtroops lasers will hit (Bespin)
7. Add blast marks to stormtroops who are shoot
8. Change location of Laser shots where they hit the wall in same spot twice
9. "Blood Stripe" on Han's pants color correction

Sound:

1. Boba Fetts Voice *
2. Changing the Wampa Ice Lair sfx (less obviously the Elephant/Rancor/T-Rex/Cloverfield Monster/Tie Fighter/etc.)
3. Reinsert Audio bite of Lando's Mic (sfx)
4. Add FX of MF landing gear retracting when taking off
5. The wrist communicator between Lando and Lobot the same sfx as Luke and Han earlier and off sync

Music:

1. Reinstatement of Originally composed but Unused Moments
2. Duel of the Fates (sketchrob) *
3. Music Quality (rebuilding of soundtrack)
4. Syncing transition between 'MAIN TITLE' and 'PROBE DROID' is a few seconds off
5. Horrible Fanfare as Han enters Echo base
6. Abrupt cut of music as 3P0 speaks to Han about Luke missing
7. Abrupt Music cut off when Han is encased in Carbonite
8. Replacing Finale Music
9. Resync Sheild Generator destruction music

Hoth:

1. Tracks in Snow for Taun Taun (establishing shot)
2. Transparency of Fighters#
3. Probe Droid Reconnaissance background fix#
4. Taun Taun Eyes (Even just pupils)*
5. Taun Taun shadows#
6. Taun Taun animation (motion blurs)
7. Fix the boom mike reflection in Luke's goggles on the TaunTaun.
8. Wampas hands have more motion when attacking (Sevb32 )
9. Edge of Wampa arm puppet visible
10. Anthony Daniels chin visible during the “Deck Officer!” scene (Sevb32 )
11. Deck Doors closing twice
12. Remove Stick used to tip AT-AT over
13. Add Luke to the shot of the AT-AT falling over
14. Added AT-AT's and AT-ST's
15. More evacuation shots including paralyzed Star Destroyers or small skirmishes
16. Removal/trimming of Wampa Ice Lair shots showing Wampa
17. More Snow Troops
18. More Rebel Turrets and more firing. More Rebel Troops
19. More Expansive Battle
20. Interior of Walkers should be Red (or shots from outside changed to not show red)
21. 0:04:04 - Paint out crew-person’s hair at left side of screen.
22. 0:09:55 - Move saber deactivation sound to 4 seconds later, or digitally retract saber earlier.
23. 0:33:29 - Fix matte work on shield generator. #
24. 0:35:35 - Fix jump cut when snowtrooper is hit by blaster fire.
25. 0:36:23 - Stabilise R2's text on Luke's readout. (When flying from Hoth)
26. Frame missing from “This goes here, that goes there!” Watch troops on floor
27. If Wampa Ice Lair kept, add smoke/scorch to Wampa wound
28. More AT-AT's brought down. maybe Another goes down after Luke figures out how to take down (but is shot down)
29. Larger blockade
30. Luke too easily escapes Blockade
31. Red Bacta
32. Entrance to the Echo Base hangar (outside doors) could show more than just BLUE
33. The shot of the Probe Droid flying away from the crator (done in CG in the SE) looks bad. Perhaps some combination of the original with this redone one?
34. Recoloring one of the officers sitting next to Lea in the control room as Han enters hair as to fix the camera flip.
35. If you're keeping the SE Droid Crash /Exit with the new CG shot, be sure to fix the glitch in the arm near the end as it exits to the left. The Arm changes position
36. shadows to speeders/falcon as they fly over snow on Hoth (provided the angle of the sun would realistically make a shadow visiable)
37. Add more subtle display to Snowspeeders Instrument panels
38. Add At-At's landing on Hoth*
39. Add burn marks to At-At's where shot by lasers* (Can ice scorch??)
40. Add Camera Shake to Luke's Snowspeeder Crash
41. Color correction/Design changes between model/full size Snow Speeders (cooling grates on back and orange stripes)
42. Blue Rogue squadron helmet insignia colors
43. Bad mixture of Luke element and speeder being crushed element
44. Power/Shield generator destruction signified inside by lights flickering
45. Removal of Wires holding speeders
46. Update displays in Rebel Hoth Base ala Yavin Base in ANH:R (with some digital text/annotations, and flashing graphics)
47. After the Rebel Transport makes it past the disabled Star Destroyer, they should jump to hyperspace, in order to truly be "away"
48. Taun Taun claw broken off in close up of luke muttering "Degobah"
49. Right before Han gives C-3PO "the finger" as they're trying to get the Falcon out of Echo Base the entire computer console prop shakes because he's leaning on it 

Dagobah:

1. Emotions to Yoda (sketchrob)*
2. Yoda's skin color
3. You're Lucky you dont' taste very good” restored
4. More water dripping off X-Wing
5. Luke's vision (Audio or Visuual) example in film
6. Deleted Yoda landing in Episode III shows more creatures. Incorporate some?
7. Add Camera shake to Luke's X-Wing crash on Dagobah
8. Add Missing push button to Luke's Lightsaber (when Luke meets Yoda)
9. Add movement to fog for animal that Luke steps on
10. Fix jump cut to Vaders mask exploding revealing Luke
11. Remove Levitation Wires
12. Fix motion of Luke's X-Wing landing on Dagobah (when Yoda force levitates out of the swamp and onto dry land; motion when coming down and Luke pats it with hand seems too awkward/fakey)
13. Yoda's Decrepid Pod in distance **(which might need a cannon check as I could ahve sworn I read that the pod was launched back out into space so no sign would be found)**
14. Ground bowing under Luke as he walks past yoda saying "You want the impossible."

Cloud City:

1. Luke's Scream when he lets go of Ledge
2. scorch marks to Hans cloths after interrogation (sketchrob)
3. Finding a way to keep “Bring my Shuttle” and continuity and keep pace
4. Added shot of the readout in the Falcon showing the “Lando System”
5. 5)Sky traffic after “evacuate” order
6. Redundant backgrounds (Falcon/Slave I take offs, establishing shots, escape, windows)
7. Bespin should look claustrophobic (Mining Colony); NOT like Coruscant
8. Computerized Establishing Shots should be rethought, changed/removed. Stick out
9. Windows/not windows continuity during Lando's treason
10. 1:43:27 - Add windshield to Slave 1.
11. Luke turns off/hands off lightsaber to offstage hand, but tip can be seen (after vader falls from carbon freeze platform)
12. Door frame that locks out R2 from following Luke was above floor level (R2 wouldn't have easily followed)
13. Remove extra clothing used to hide Luke's “non-severed” hand
14. Interactive clouds (arrival, and when looping around to get Luke)
15. Reflections in 3P0 of Camera Crew – on conveyor to the incinerator
16. Reordering Han and Leia talking/ Chewie finding whats left of 3P0 (BrachioInGen edit)
17. Ceiling in Leia's quarters should be restored to Original (not fuzzily made to look like sky in SE)
18. As Vader and Luke fight on Gantry, where filmed area ends and matte painting begins TOO obvious
19. Star Destroyer entering atmosphere / taking over cloud city
20. “Who are you!” voice for when 3P0 stumbles into the Troopers restored
21. remove obvious squib on Stormtroopers chest before Leia shots him in cloud city (Just before Leia gets in the elevator).
22. when Chewie bangs 3PO's head on the Falcon during the escape (3PO says "Bend down, that hurts" etc.) a fixture on the Falcon wiggles, making it look a little fake. But then again the Falcon is a "piece'a junk."
23. Keep Spiral as Millennium Falcon goes into Hypserspace
24. Add 3PO coming down stairs of Bespin
25. Fix Boba Fett's Knee guards being upside down in Carbon Chamber shots
26. Add range finder lens to Boba Fett as he puts Han in cargo hold (it's missing)
27. Remove Luke's Head poping back into the shot when he jumps off Carbonite platform
28. Fix Jump-cut of steal gate doors closing behind Luke
29. Add scortch marks to wall during Vader/Luke Lightsaber battle
30. No visible damage to vader when luke hit shoulder
31. Sevb32 suggests the removal of "cut tape" used when Vader slices the poles off in the final battle. Or at least, the making of a cohesive color as some shots show it to be dark/others silver.
32. Improvising the sunrise-from-space effects when you see the Falcon leaving Bespin being chased by TIEs

Asteroid:

1. 0:39:49 - Replace shadows of Falcon and TIEs on asteroid to be accurate to the shape of the ships.
2. 0:52:04 - Erase the 'greeblies' falling off of 3PO when he interrupts Han and Leia.
3. 0:52:16 - When an asteroid hits the command tower on a Star Destroyer, the tower just magically dissolves belong the explosion element
4. Minocks- Something!
5. More Tie- Fighters
6. remove Han Mouthing Leia's "Hardly Enough to get me Excited"
7. Fix TIE Fighter explosion through Astroid crevice
8. Add damage to astroid from Bombers
9. Replace tool in Han's hand with Blaster when shooting Mynock
10. The course of the Falcon as it exits the slug should be more dynamic

11. Fix asteroid collisions/explosions in space (they collide, but shouldn't explode unless hit by a laser or there is some sort of hot gas inside them)

12. Fix explosions on asteroids on shot where Star Destroyer blasts them with its lasers

Executor (Empire General):

1. Emperors Hologram
2. The Bounty Hunter Scene could use subtle emotes/updated Bounty Hunters/Droids (sketchrob)
3. See the Fleet enter the Hoth System
4. 1:13:36 - Remove Neida's blink (after being choked) when Vader's cape swipes past his face.
5. 1:43:27 - Add windshield to Slave 1.
6. Open the Film with the Executor
7. Open the film with a skeletal DS2 visible OR
8. Expansion of the first shot of the Imperial Fleet (Inclusion of DS2?)
9. Add camera shake as Stardestroyers sheilds collide "Take evasive maneuvers"
10. Fix Imperial officers rank pins/cylinders
11. Replace Needa's shuttle with Lambda-Class T-4A Shuttle
12. Move Slave 1 ship farther back while following MF
13. Add display to Boba Fett's Range finder when it is down
14. When Stardestroyers Collide (sounds like an album) have explosions (maybe just glimpses in distance and/camera shakes
15. Shadowing Cruiser under the Executor (flipping with same shot used earlier for 'The First Catch of the Day')

Rebel Fleet:

1. Adding Ships: A-Wing, B-Wing, Mon Calamari Cruiser?
   
2. Hyperspace Jump*
3. Fix Luke getting his mechanical arm FX (bottom half looks too fake)

* - In Debate
# - Already Being Done

Just keeping this easily located

Yes, it's still being edited.  Ady took one step back and two steps forward when he used a computer crash and upgrade as an excuse to start over in 1080p instead of standard def.  Check the other thread for more info.

I update it.

If your idea isn't put on it,then it was shot down... or Ady said he wasn't doing it...

The purpose of this thread is to make it easier for Adywan to see the suggestions.

He's been keeping pretty up to date in the main thread, so the only thing I'm doing is adding suggestions he likes... or ones he's not commenting on.

If he's commented on one saying "I'm not going to do that," then what purpose does it serve for me to put it in this thread? Especially when he's already said "I'm not doing it."

If you don't see it in this thread, post about it in the main thread. If he shoots it down, then he shoots it down and it won't be added.

This is more of a checklist for him. To make it easier for him. But he's been keeping pretty up to date in the main thread so there was not too much to be done here or added. It was mostly in the first 80 pages or so where he wouldn't post for 2-3 pages and there's be about 12 different suggestions.

I also don't adjust the list every day. I do have a life as well, but when i get a chance, I sit down and I read every damned post and if there is something suggested that's not on the list, or that ady doesn't comment on or says he'll do, I add them.