My aim with this was to address the obvious-known-this film is a mess...I loved the film but in my opinion their were scenes included in the film that have no purpose or aim (And I've seen the film nearly five times now and I think they function well without them

So I've seen the film on multiple occasions and have mapped out exactly what works and what doesn't work...so I hope to trim the movie down and maily condense it to the bare essentials and yet still have it function.

Some ideas that I have is to eliminate many references to the graphic novels, delete unorthorox scenes (e.g. When Boxer and Krysta are watching Kiss Me Deadly, all of the TV presentations, when Fortunio is watching Now!, Krysta's dinner with Cyndi, Teri and Cyndi on surveillance, Zora and Walter in the ice-cream van, and the sequence with Boxer in the book store are several examples)